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I'm not broken,
Just a little bent.

All those words you've spoken,
Just left me a little dent.

My heart isn't shattered,
It just has a crack.

Sore, bruised, and battered,
But my tears I hold back.

Please don't worry about me.
I'm fine, I swear.

I just want you to see,
That I'm still able to be repaired.

Even though I'm hurt, damaged, and weakened,
Even though I've felt so much pain.

It doesn't mean I'm truly beaten,
It just means that I'll need a little help again.










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rosenthia Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student General Artist
This Is Beautiful I Love The Wording And Structure! :heart: A Gorgeous Piece With A Meaning Behind It A Message You Did An amazing Job Writing This You Have Quiet The Talent ^w^
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
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rosenthia Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student General Artist
No Problem~ :heart: This Has Become One Of My Favourite Little Poems
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you liked it :hug:
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rosenthia Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student General Artist
:hug: Its Very Well Written
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AmbrosiaSweetTart Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  New member
Wow! What came to mind when I finished was.....Amen! Love what this represents! Thanks for sharing!
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i know that feeling all too well, pretending to be alright when you're dying on the inside. it sucks at best. I like the poem and i can relate to it, and i agree with your last line, sometimes we need help getting back up on our feet once more.
great work :clap:
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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