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I'm not broken,
Just a little bent.

All those words you've spoken,
Just left me a little dent.

My heart isn't shattered,
It just has a crack.

Sore, bruised, and battered,
But my tears I hold back.

Please don't worry about me.
I'm fine, I swear.

I just want you to see,
That I'm still able to be repaired.

Even though I'm hurt, damaged, and weakened,
Even though I've felt so much pain.

It doesn't mean I'm truly beaten,
It just means that I'll need a little help again.










Next poem in the 100 Themes Challenge: fav.me/d3eynl0 by Soft-Twilight

Criticism is welcome :)
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AsherFlo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Professional Writer
I like you. Very much lol
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle:
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Student General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! so sad but well summarized!
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Love 
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ezziethenekolover Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So true... this poem speaks deep into my own feelings... It's so beautiful... :') It's the kind of feelings that some struggle with on occasion... and for some... everyday.
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it <3
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ezziethenekolover Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Liked is an understatement my friend... :) I thought it deserves more then just 'like'
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my apologies xD Glad you 'loved' it! Is that more accurate? :giggle:
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ezziethenekolover Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha Yup. :P
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