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I'm not broken,
Just a little bent.

All those words you've spoken,
Just left me a little dent.

My heart isn't shattered,
It just has a crack.

Sore, bruised, and battered,
But my tears I hold back.

Please don't worry about me.
I'm fine, I swear.

I just want you to see,
That I'm still able to be repaired.

Even though I'm hurt, damaged, and weakened,
Even though I've felt so much pain.

It doesn't mean I'm truly beaten,
It just means that I'll need a little help again.










Next poem in the 100 Themes Challenge: fav.me/d3eynl0 by Soft-Twilight

Criticism is welcome :)
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AmbrosiaSweetTart Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  New member
Wow! What came to mind when I finished was.....Amen! Love what this represents! Thanks for sharing!
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i know that feeling all too well, pretending to be alright when you're dying on the inside. it sucks at best. I like the poem and i can relate to it, and i agree with your last line, sometimes we need help getting back up on our feet once more.
great work :clap:
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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AsherFlo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Professional Writer
I like you. Very much lol
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle:
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Student General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! so sad but well summarized!
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Love 
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