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Knock me down
But I will still rise

Shun me
But my hope never dies

Tell me I 'can't do it'
But I will prove you wrong

Break me down into pieces
But inside I'll remain strong

A fiery passion burns within me
One that you will not take away

Forever I will stand freely
And my fears, I will slay
 

My next poem on the 100 Themes Challenge: fav.me/d3eynl0 by Soft-Twilight

Thanks for reading :) Criticism is always welcome ^^
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evil0verlady Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome!:thumbsup: :+fav:
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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TriinErg Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This is simple but very good to read. 
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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Hazelstar67 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
Your flow on this poem is very nice, I like how you rhymed, but it wasn't like you tried TOO hard (Ive seen poems ruined because they tried too hard to rhyme). Very nice!
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your feedback :)
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TheFairiesWhispers Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is very inspirational and motivational. I really like the flow of the poem, too. Wonderful job! :la:
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :hug:
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TheFairiesWhispers Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome!
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dappeltail Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wow this is really well written good job
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