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Please.

Talk to me.

Tell me what shattered your heart inside.

Your heart is beating, yet, you're not alive.

You're hearing, yet, you're not listening.

You've become a black shadow.

Lifeless.

I can see the demons in your eyes.

Your eyes have glazed over.

Your life is coming to an end.

But yet, you're still healthy, still alive.

You smile to hide your pain.

But you're slowly dying inside.

You keep saying 'I'm fine', when I know you're not.

You tell me 'it's just a phase. Don't worry'

But I've never worried so much before.

You're like a leaf

Your beauty slowly withering away, unbeknownst to everyone around you.

Soon, you're going to fall from the tree, and hit the ground.

People will walk over you, ignoring how much pain they've caused your heart.

But hold on.

Please.

It gets better, I promise.

Your heart will beat once again.

I'm hoping for a sign of life.

I'm watching for those eyes to fill with joy, like they used to be.

I beg you with all my heart.

Stay alive.

For me.

Just some inspiration to anyone who's feeling like they're losing a battle.
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Itīs beautifully writte. You managed to make this poem very emotional and meaningful. Itīs great advice for everyone who suffers. Time heals the pain.
Also, great work of poetry. You wrote it very fluently and interestingly. I enjoyed reading:)
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your feedback, it's very appreciated :squee:
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JennahIsSoCoolLIKE Feb 25, 2014  Student Interface Designer
This reminds me of the poetry I used to write.
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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RedeemerBobtail Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just love all these that you wrote.. But you gotta write something cheery sometime XD :heart:
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
One day I will...maybe xD I think writing sad poems is my guilty pleasure xD
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RedeemerBobtail Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

:D Okay then! cant wait to see one if ya ever decide to make one!

Ah, I see, you like the keep us wondering. XD

 

 *Prods with a stick* "like make one... sooon. I don wanna wait!"

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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, I'm so evil for making you all wait *laughs evilly*
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RedeemerBobtail Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuu  Nuuu!
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xLuminaa Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it! :heart: Heart Love 
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