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Please.

Talk to me.

Tell me what shattered your heart inside.

Your heart is beating, yet, you're not alive.

You're hearing, yet, you're not listening.

You've become a black shadow.

Lifeless.

I can see the demons in your eyes.

Your eyes have glazed over.

Your life is coming to an end.

But yet, you're still healthy, still alive.

You smile to hide your pain.

But you're slowly dying inside.

You keep saying 'I'm fine', when I know you're not.

You tell me 'it's just a phase. Don't worry'

But I've never worried so much before.

You're like a leaf

Your beauty slowly withering away, unbeknownst to everyone around you.

Soon, you're going to fall from the tree, and hit the ground.

People will walk over you, ignoring how much pain they've caused your heart.

But hold on.

Please.

It gets better, I promise.

Your heart will beat once again.

I'm hoping for a sign of life.

I'm watching for those eyes to fill with joy, like they used to be.

I beg you with all my heart.

Stay alive.

For me.

Just some inspiration to anyone who's feeling like they're losing a battle.
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8lifflefoot Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your style is so beautiful and fluent! I trully love how you captured the emotions in this piece. The message shines brightly and I hope it reaches the ones who need it
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your kind words :heart:
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hotohori2 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
I love it totally, this style is so interesting and it is so cool, great work, so sweet, i totally love it god dammit, yes! ^^
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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Eraezr Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know what its like to be in that position. The one who's speaking that it.
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hug 
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UnremmitingHope Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This makes me think of a friend...

I think she might have killed herself today, so... I broke down when I saw this...
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so sorry...I truly hope that she didn't kill herself. If you ever need to talk you can note me :hug:
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scarlette13 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
Itīs beautifully writte. You managed to make this poem very emotional and meaningful. Itīs great advice for everyone who suffers. Time heals the pain.
Also, great work of poetry. You wrote it very fluently and interestingly. I enjoyed reading:)
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xXSeas-of-EmeraldXx Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your feedback, it's very appreciated :squee:
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